Spelling errors, removed "asynchronicity", cut down on verbiage in intro.

diff --git a/doc/txt/tep114.txt b/doc/txt/tep114.txt
index c1f8b11698692e9f06cd30769174a585a23d0764..c2e646cb2b4b53ba0dd5b1a9035bab5a883be36c 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/txt/tep114.txt
+++ b/doc/txt/tep114.txt
@@ -5,8 +5,7 @@ SIDs: Source and Sink Independent Drivers
 :TEP: 114
 :Group: Core Working Group
 :Type: Documentary 
 :TEP: 114
 :Group: Core Working Group
 :Type: Documentary 

-:Status: Draft
-:TinyOS-Version: 2.x
+:Status: Final

 :Author: Gilman Tolle, Philip Levis, and David Gay
 
 :Draft-Created: 30-Oct-2005
 :Author: Gilman Tolle, Philip Levis, and David Gay
 
 :Draft-Created: 30-Oct-2005


@@ -54,13 +53,12 @@ and sensor values are always 16 bits, although only some subset of the
 bits may be significant (e.g., a 12-bit value).
 
 Because sensing is an integral part of high-level application logic,
 bits may be significant (e.g., a 12-bit value).
 
 Because sensing is an integral part of high-level application logic,

-the asynchronicity of these events means that high-level components
-must work with atomic section, even if the sampling rate is very low
+having asynchronous events means that high-level components
+must work with atomic sections, even if the sampling rate is very low

 (e.g., every five minutes) and so could be easily placed in a
 task. Race conditions are problematic and possible in any real time
 multi-tasking design. Race conditions are a failure in design, and
 (e.g., every five minutes) and so could be easily placed in a
 task. Race conditions are problematic and possible in any real time
 multi-tasking design. Race conditions are a failure in design, and

-especially difficult to detect at low sampling rates. Careful and
-skillful design review practices flush out race conditions early on.
+especially difficult to detect at low sampling rates. 

 
 Additionally, not all sensors require ADC conversions from the MCU.
 Many sensors today are digital. To sample these sensors, the MCU sends
 
 Additionally, not all sensors require ADC conversions from the MCU.
 Many sensors today are digital. To sample these sensors, the MCU sends


@@ -135,7 +133,7 @@ If the ``result`` parameter of the ``Read.readDone`` and
 ``val`` parameter MUST be filled with zeroes.
 
 If the call to ``read`` has returned SUCCESS, but the ``readDone``
 ``val`` parameter MUST be filled with zeroes.
 
 If the call to ``read`` has returned SUCCESS, but the ``readDone``

-event has not yet been signalled, then a subsequent call to ``read``
+event has not yet been signaled, then a subsequent call to ``read``

 MUST return EBUSY or FAIL.  This simple locking technique, as opposed
 to a more complex system in which multiple read/readDone pairs may be
 outstanding, is intended to reduce the complexity of SID client code.
 MUST return EBUSY or FAIL.  This simple locking technique, as opposed
 to a more complex system in which multiple read/readDone pairs may be
 outstanding, is intended to reduce the complexity of SID client code.


@@ -230,7 +228,7 @@ building a linked list.
 
 After posting at least one buffer, the client can call read() with a
 specified sample period in terms of microseconds. The driver then
 
 After posting at least one buffer, the client can call read() with a
 specified sample period in terms of microseconds. The driver then

-begins to fill the buffers in the queue, signalling the bufferDone()
+begins to fill the buffers in the queue, signaling the bufferDone()

 event when a buffer has been filled. The client MAY call postBuffer()
 after read() in order to provide the device with new storage for
 future reads.
 event when a buffer has been filled. The client MAY call postBuffer()
 after read() in order to provide the device with new storage for
 future reads.