Clean up the text on the oss web pages.

[oss-web.git] / in / aptrepo.md

diff --git a/in/aptrepo.md b/in/aptrepo.md
index 95f905b13e161eceb0fb34168da73d0f42a75ed1..a505740d7a6a17ba67f735107dde40be2d1342e6 100644 (file)
--- a/in/aptrepo.md
+++ b/in/aptrepo.md
@@ -16,16 +16,17 @@ Karmic.
 
 ## Step 1 - Add the backports repository
 
-Ubuntu Hardy users need to activate the hardy-backports repository to use our
-`cp210x-module-dkms` package.  Ubuntu Karmic users can skip this step.  Note,
-you can also activate hardy-backports from the GUI.
+Ubuntu Hardy users need to activate the hardy-backports repository, as our
+`cp210x-module-dkms` package requires a newer dkms than is available otherwise.
+Ubuntu Karmic users can skip this step.  You can also activate hardy-backports
+from the GUI.
 
     sudo cp /etc/apt/sources.list /etc/apt/sources.list.bak
     cat <<+EOF+ | sudo tee -a /etc/apt/sources.list
     deb http://us.archive.ubuntu.com/ubuntu hardy-backports main restricted universe multiverse
     +EOF+
 
-## Step 2 - Adding the TMI repository to sources.list.d
+## Step 2 - Adding the TMI repository to the sources list
 
     cat <<+EOF+ | sudo tee /etc/apt/sources.list.d/tmi.list
     # TMI repository
@@ -36,9 +37,8 @@ you can also activate hardy-backports from the GUI.
 
 ## Step 2 - Adding the TMI package key
 
-When you issued `apt-get update` above, you saw a key warning.  We solve this
-by installing a package from the TMI repository that contains our packaging
-key.
+When you issued `apt-get update` above, you saw a key warning.  Resolve future
+key related warning messages by installing `tmi-keyring`.
 
     sudo apt-get install --yes --allow-unauthenticated tmi-keyring
 
@@ -46,12 +46,14 @@ You should now verify the installed key.  Run the `sudo apt-key list | less`
 and look for the following two lines, ensuring your output matches that below:
 
     pub   1024D/E9BE0373 2009-12-08
-    uid                  TMI Packages <pkgs@titaniummirror.com>
+    uid                  TMI Packages <EMAILADDR>
+
+The email address above is 'com dot titaniummirror at pkgs', in reverse.
 
 ## Step 3 - Install packages
 
 You can now install packages from the TMI repository.  For example:
 
-* Install our [[cp210x]] driver: `sudo apt-get install cp210x-module-dkms`
-
 * Install our [[tinyos]] development suite: `sudo apt-get install tinyos`
+
+* Install our [[cp210x]] driver: `sudo apt-get install cp210x-module-dkms`