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 # Introduction
 
 [Titanium Mirror, Inc.](http://www.titaniummirror.com) (TMI) is a successful
-small business in part because we have can leverage the development work of
-other talented professionals who have opted to release the product of their
-labors as Open Source Software (OSS).  Over time, we have made our own changes
-to support our business and customers.  We publish our work to this website in
-case others find our contributions useful.
-
-Of course, we make an effort to contribute patches to the relevant upstream
-maintainers.  But it takes time for patches to migrate upstream, and there is
-no guarantee that something we find useful is general enough to be incorporated
-into an upstream project.  For these reasons, we publish this website.
+small business in part because we can leverage the development work of other
+talented professionals who have opted to release the fruits of their labors as
+Open Source Software (OSS).  Over time, we have made our own changes to support
+our business and customers.  On this website, we publish our work in case
+others find our contributions useful.
 
 # The Projects
 
 Select a project to browse from the Navigation panel on the left.
+
+# News
+
+This website has not yet been released to the public.